All Comments on 'Founders Ch. 05'

This chapter felt very rushed.

Thanks for your feedback. The chapters before this one have gotten polished several times since being written. By the later chapters, I had written automated tools that point out my worst habits to me. Some of the chapters in between have not yet received the full love treatment, it's true.

Wishing you well. I love your work

Thank you!

I really don't understand randomly peeing on the floor of the playroom. I mean, it's be one thing if it was your own and had proper drainage, but just helping yourself in someone else's space is kind of dickish.

Also, really having trouble understanding what any of these women see in this largely emotionless guy or how each chick he plows is instantly equated to a loving relationship.