All Comments on 'Founders Ch. 70'

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KSweetumsKSweetumsalmost 3 years agoAuthor

There is a minor continuity problem in this chapter. I've submitted a modified version that fixes it. The problem is that here, Charisse's mother is introduced, or re-introduced, as Ashley. In Chapter 18, we already met Charisse's parents briefly, and the mother's name was Lilac Flower. While Ashley was a bit cryptic about seeing after her daughter's sexual needs, Lilac Flower is a more wide open personality. She comes right out and asks Zach about it. She makes sure that Zach is ready, willing, and able to perform Charisse's favorite sexual activities. Such a caring mom! It's not often I have vignettes that make even Zach blush.

SniperkingSniperkingalmost 3 years ago

@KSweetums you mean Lilac Rainbow right?

SniperkingSniperkingalmost 3 years ago

Why the change in Lilac's behavior?

KSweetumsKSweetumsalmost 3 years agoAuthor

*Face plant* Thank you, loyal readers! Soon you will know more Founders trivia than I do! Yes indeed, it's Lilac Rainbow. I even started the correction accurately, using Lilac Rainbow. But then about halfway through, and in my comment about the fix, she inexplicably morphed into Lilac Flower. Thanks to your intervention, the correction will now be correct! :-)

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