All Comments on 'Four A's'

Your writing skill shines and you know you have left me and your other readers waiting for the next chapter. Please don't disappoint us and please don't keep us waiting too long. A little more detail of their love-making would add to an already most enjoyable read.

Keep on!

It was a good read. I felt it was unfinished though.

So another round is in order!

Thanks for writing.

sexmate

what a great start to this adventure of brother and sister love. it kept me on edge all the way keep up your great work

This was amazing please more