All Comments on 'Four Square Ch. 03'
by WifeWatchman
- 9 Comments
Anonymousover 4 years agoLooks like David Lang was murdered for some reason other than him cuckholding Tanu and Shimono is involved.
Two complaints...
1st, you need to do a little bit more spell checking. Writing it with software like MS Word or Wordperfect first could help with that.
2nd the chapter was too short.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWW, please accept my condolences for your lost relative. Apparently your readers have neglected to comment on your own personal loss. Commander Troy seems to have connected both Shimono and Trent to this murder of David along with some much needed assistance from Melina. One case solved and now on to the next one.
WifeWatchmanover 4 years agoAuthorI appreciate the condolences. It was a long time ago; before they identified what Legionnaire's Disease was. I was young, but I remember the funeral, and all those Atlanta Police Officers there.
I'm sure astute readers have also realized that a lot of the experiences at Augusta National were the author's. I did follow Mr. Fred Couples around, though I did not get an autographed golf ball. The flowers and flowering trees really are THAT impressive, including the hillside on the 6th hole where the bodies must be buried. ;) It was an unforgettable experience.
WifeWatchmanover 4 years agoAuthorThe fourth and final chapter of the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published very soon.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI have to say, in all of your stories which I have loved, you have really reached a new high with this one. Congratulations, and I'd buy the beer if I ever met you.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI can see that soon the IC and his angels will have a new set of very good detectives. Maybe it is his plan to semi retire and spend time with the family and keep a mother hen watch on his brood of MCD and Vice detectives not forgetting the Milton factor
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