by Frenemy54
I love psychic torture. You’ve got skill. Eagerly awaiting part 3. Keep up the great writing.
I commend your writing technique. The hallmark of a good adventure writer is to create villains that are eminently despicable, and Dr. Payne and crew fit that description. I couldn't even find the story erotic at all I found myself loathing the evil Foxes so much.
I am a fan of an anthromorph series know as FireFox. If you ever go to SoFurry.com I recommend it because this story is just as good as that one. And like the tale, I hope the Foxes make it out of this.