All Comments on 'Fracas at the Mansion (Feb Sucks)'

That was just horrible. Just another so called “author” working out their frustrations with a fictional story that has them lying awake at night worrying about their own wives doing the same to them.

Just stop with this nonsense and get some therapy

All the BTB fetishists will jerk themselves raw to this waste of type.

This has been done to death several times over. There is NOTHING to add to the story. Any "February Sucks" add on gets an automatic rating of 1.

Nice swatting! He accepted the apology and let her know how repugnant she is to him; well done Jim! A bit of a fantastic take on the saga but ever so much fun. 5 stars and thanks for another winner to the ever growing hoard of FS spin offs.

Interesting perspective, nice and short.

Having prevented the act, I think this scenario could give them a chance to reconcile.

blame wife, divorce her, yet she was drugged?

she fucked around and found out..........

Has to be the worst take on this story ever. Complete and utter dribble. As for a reader Joe I read these stories in the case of maybe someone will do better so far none have. Doesn't matter how many remakes of this writers do beating an original story someone else has thought of and wrote it well is a very hard accomplishment to do. What I would like to see is writers actually thinking of their own stories something original that hasn't been ripped off from a movie, book, TV or another writers efforts and trying to pass it off as something new or old but different. I see no-one has tried to rewrite qfml stories why because they can't because they are flawless.

A little bit different slant on the old story. Little Emma brought the giant ass down with a shot to the nuts. Good shot sweetie. I like anything that brings down LaValiere, and gets Linda dumped. So good story.

Of course the whole ‘date rape’ accusation crumbles to dust when she is tested for evidence of drugs in her system, as she surely would have been, when none were found she and hubby would have charges brought against them for various crimes.

But hey it ended correctly with divorce.

That was one of the better endings. I liked how quickly he turned the tables. 4*!

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yeah this story didnt have any legs. kind of undoes everything if he divorces her, what sounds like the next day

Not a bad version, I loved the unintended nut shot aces

Wow, I wouldn’t let that guy have any matches. He might burn all the houses down. He only missed calling in the National Guard troops. 5*.

Wow! That was a fun bit!

Fucking White Trailer Park Trash. Destroyed a decent man, along with their children, and both extended families. It's called COLATERAL DAMAGE, that her skanky pussy could care less about.

Really Fun. You are a great writer. Easy to read well placed and your continuity is spot on. but these renditions are getting both predictable and somewhat boring. I agree with most readers that all we need do is skip to the last page as everything before that was GA. I like the other writings in your library better than these rewrites.

The trouble with February sux stories is they misunderstand the dynamic.

Which isn't surprising as most readers of LW seem to view women as possessions and treat marriage as something other than a contract the bounds of which are decided upon by each couple, not some idiotic higher power.

To put it another way, they're constructed in a way that requires a peanut allergy sufferer to knowingly eat a peanut sandwich, without an epipen close by. Just isnt going to happen, and if it did we'd demand a lot more detail and read with empathy and compassion. Well the humans among us would.

GW's original foreword says nothing about it being a special occasion, says nothing about there being a whole gang of friends and has absolutely no insight into the character of the husband of the outspoken woman.

Every 'normal' man and woman will at one or more times in their lives had the banter with their friends as to 'would you shag that'. Yes, even married folks will respond in the affirmative, but no one would expect there to be zero caveats as to when or how it could happen.

So GW, and almost everyone else just constructed, or followed the usual plot whereby almost every reader is going to think that what Linda did was aggregious.

I've yet to read one whereby the couple are out on their own, Linda asks/informs MC that she's going to spend the night with famous celebrity and the MC says OK because they view the celebrity as nothing more than a sex doll fuck toy.

The reason this never happens is because the majority of readers of LW can't comprehend a world in which a couple can love each other to the extent of wanting to spend their whole lives together and still think that sex with others is possible under specific conditions. Sadly, almost all of it comes down to fragile egos and religious backwardness.

If we're being honest, we'd appreciate that less than 100 years ago women would have been looked upon by the general public as sex crazed/cheaters/dirty sluts etc just for masturbating. And boys/men were regularly told that it would lead to madness.

I'm not saying that as they stand the February sux stories aren't right, just saying that they're constructed in such a way that it's the only valid outcome considering the set up.

In reality a woman could fulfill the requirements of the original foreword by GW without being disrespectful, untrustworthy or even cheating... Sadly most of the readers here would just froth at the mouth while screaming wimpy cuck.

Anonymous downstairs. Let me shag your wife from time to time since you are such a good person u delusional pathetic cuvk. Do you even understand what marriage means. And why fidelity matters in keeping it intact and strong?

Actually did you ever ponder why humans came up with the idea of marriage in the first place instead of rutting like animals randomly.

"One of the cops held Tommy back to keep the distractions to a minimum."

Timmy kicked the cop in the shin and ran after his sister. After Mark backhanded Emma in the face and she flew backward into the wall. Timmy jumped up and kicked Mark in the nads. Mark doubled over and Timmy drove his knee into Mark's nose.

Great story. 5 stars from Xluckylee for a great new idea of a way to handle the situation

Much as I like this for an alternative ending, it just can't match up with the original.

Football player and his buddies seem to have been properly punished for destroying peoples' lives.

GREAT alternate ending!!!

Brilliant idea calling the cops right away with the date rape accusations

Excellent! Thanks!

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R.S.

One of the better takes, rating a 4 from me.

Bill S.

Good story with a semi-reasonable conclusion!! Liked the idea that asshole and his two buddies were charged!!

Short and sweet! Excellent. Liked that Morrison's also got shut down.

It doesn't likely deserve 5*, however, I gave that rating because the versions with the final reconciliation piss me off so much that I give 5* to the ones that have no reconciliation.

I’ve read a lot of February suck sequels, and this is one of the more enjoyable ones. The only thing that could’ve been better would’ve been Linda‘s remorse.

Good one....get to tha choppa!

It's not that a woman wouldn't do this, it's that a woman with a husband like this wouldn't.

I suspect that the woman in GA original observation was married to a completely different kind of man, I also wonder how much of what they said was bravado/banter and not actually what they'd do when push comes to shove.

Lol, the cuck from 24 days ago responding to the previous commenter exactly as they'd spelt it out how they'd react.

As for the questions posed, a quick perusal of history would teach you more than you'd care to learn, as it's not like anything has stopped you from climbing out of your ignorance other than a willful disregard for facts.

ok

Yeah, too little remorse, too late. Well written, thanks.

@anon 1 month ago. Do you even understand the history of marriage and how it differs across time and cultures. What you think of as marriage is just a Christian construct, which has itself changed and is still changing.

Decent.

Pretty good version. I liked it. BardnotBard

Good story. Five stars.

Great story and nice ending. I've never heard a variation of the story quite like this.

Great story!!

Really? That's the best man you could find? He can't even keep his wife from wandering. If even a loser of a sportsperson soon to be secondhand car salesman/bankrupt manages to entice her away, what hope is there for him.

I could understand it if it were a successful musician, artist, actor or a comedian even, but a sportsperson with a sell by date and loser written all over him, nope not going to believe it.

Unsatisfying to the Nth degree. While Marc's justice was good, the way it was left with Jim and Linda stank to high heaven. 2*

The new idea of using the press so quickly was a great idea

YES! It does happen in real life. Not February

but August.

My bride of 2 months did almost the exact same thing at a venue where, my best friend's band was warmup... for Bad Company.

Only he was a Radio DJ not a jock.

I went from kind and friendly to violent and vengeful on all involved... don't know how I never faced a judge. The statue of limitations is long since passed. They're stuck with the memories of my revenge for betraying me and I with theirs. PTSD for us all!!

What is it with you and these damn poor excuses of rewriting a legend of a story, how many have you done so far 5, 10 a 100, will the pain ever stop. Your writing how maybe good but you remind me of an ambulance chaser, always following in someone else's great path as you can't create on your own a story unique to yourself. You have to copy someone else's. I'm not surprised so many talented writers on here are starting to post copywrites on them, with people like you tarnishing their original works with this. I rated it 2 stars nothing to do with the story, more to do with your writing abilities, if you keep copying people you will never reach a constant flow of 5 stars, nor ever produce proper stories you could make a decent living from, remember......Ambulance Chaser as that's you now.

Well, a different approach again.

I wish I believed our society was this functional, but it's a great story. The narcs burn themselves.

la mejor versión👏👏👏