by theognis
Thanks for the comment. Sorry, but I've decided not to continue the story. I've condensed this chapter and the second into the first, and I think I'll let it go at that. Annemarie was a mystery in real life, and she will have to remain one here as well.
chap 2 & 3 are in chap 1..........you have a very long way to go in your writing career either stop OR get a better editor to keep you on track.