All Comments on 'Frankie's Night With Jason and Wife'

Very nice

This husband is just a weak, pathetic, spineless "bitch boy". He is just disgusting. He carries on and on about his cheating slut wife hiding the fact she would be seeing this Jason guy. Then he carries on like a child with crazy accusations but allows his cheating slut wife to take control instead of telling her that if she cheats with that arsehole Jason, she can pack her fucking bags.

Finally, he bitches at his wife and starts apologising for what he is saying and when the slut calls his bluff saying "she fucked him all night" he then gives her PERMISSION to fuck him or anyone else she wants!

So, the cheap slut wife just allows herself to be fucked by both Jason and his wife... and bitch boy practically starts wagging his tail with excitement, hoping he'll get to join in next time. The story makes me want to vomit.

I really wouldn't have an issue with this isn't for the fact she kept going after a guy she knows her husband doesn't like and has problems with. That was made expressly clear in the previous story snd was even present this chapter.

I don’t understand how the wife can be such a bitch about Jason. They both know she has a weakness for him and when he points that out it’s like he the asshole of the year. I could understand it in a story where the husband is little more than a slave as those wives clearly don’t love their husbands but this story seemed different but she’s acting just like the manipulative bitches in the extreme stories.

You started out with a good story, a healthy story, but it became uninteresting, boring, and sick. This addition to the drooping tale of Frankie, Michael, and Jason does no credit to you as an imaginative author. Also, the editing here is poor, and the grammar at times is poorer, which is surprising in an author with your obvious talent.

You have turned the tale on the husband he doesn’t come across as the same man as he’d been portrayed , he seems a much weaker , easily manipulated version . She played him like a fiddle and he cowered and fumed but done nothing to stand up for himself and stick to his guns . No wonder she so easily gave up her vows again and in a public setting and so obviously that Jason took one glance at her and knew she’d just had an orgasm! She is losing any respect she had left for her husband and is blatantly rubbing it in his face while using manipulative crocodile tears to fool him into thinking she felt bad and so she can get away with it more . He needs to grow a pair and dump that cheating backstabbing gaslighting slut .

The 4 stars label says..."Like It"--but I didn't.

It was well written but the entire plot development was based on misdirection and the attitude of..."tough shit cuck-husband--I fuck who I want and you have no say so shut up and maybe I'll let you eat it when I come home."

Yeah, supposedly the previous long-term 4-couple swap arrangement set a pattern that this was simply an unscheduled extension of. But it wasn't. This was a premeditated cheating affair with an old lover (the emotionally most disturbing one from her husband's point of view) which was only revealed when he discovered her having masturbated to the video of her previous cheating incident with the guy.

Sorry. I have to agree with the previous comment that the husband has no cojones and she's a manipulating, emasculating sadist. You usually write damn good stories...but this was not one of them.

I like that you revived Jason since Frankie affair with him was hot and erotic. What I don’t like is bringing in A Chloe into the mix. Can you weave more stories about Jason’s adulterous and secretive affair with Frankie once more?

After all this, you come up with this ending? Entirely unsatisfactory. One would think that this story was written by someone who had no knowledge with the first 10+ chapters.