All Comments on 'Fraternity Discipline Pt. 01'

I got all hot and excited reading this chapter and can’t wait for the next. Please don’t wait too long posting a continuation

I am just curious…pls continue

It's pending approval so it'll be out in the next few days. I originally submitted all three parts at once but I was worried part 1 might get rejected while part 2 got published. Glad it got you wanting more 😉

I realize this is an erotic story but it seems to be perpetuating some very unfortunate and untrue myths about fraternities. I was in a fraternity all four years of college and throughout graduate school. There are no punishments held among initiated brothers, no sacred duties to enforce or endure such, and certainly no naked sessions pitting friend against friend with humiliation and pain. Like the punished, I don’t know what it coming but it’s clear that it is going to mistreat and disrespect him - which is really unsettling when presented as ok between best friends and “brothers.”

Great start but we need more asap!

Thanks for the feedback. I knew I was taking a risk using a trope. However, like you said, it it meant to be erotic. I'm sure there aren't drill instructors fucking their subordinates in the marines or huge gay orgies in the navy or every massage ending in a handjob.

I didn't go to college in the US but we did have a probationary period for new initiates where "you fuck up, you get fucked up". Nothing sexual but you get the point. The story was meant to be a somewhat eroticized recreation of my own experiences whether or not they play into a stereotype. Although I do apologize if it triggers/was triggering for anyone.

Don't stop now keep it going

This is an erotic story site. Go through the hundreds (thousands?) of stories here and you'll find countless derivative tropes. "Loving" wives willing to get banged by as many other men as possible? Yep! Black guys with HUGE penises? Sure!! White twinks who can swallow them whole (hole?)? Of course!!! And yes, among these tropes, you're bound (pardon the pun) to find many fraternity hazing situations. So, what if this is another one? The fact that there is a friendship between the these two existing characters makes it more intriguing -- which kinda upends the "trope"! So, bring on the next chapters and ignore silly criticism.

I am not anti- BDSM nor am I anti- LBGTQ+. I am anti-abuse. Your story is pro abuse.