All Comments on 'Free Ride'

What? No epilogue???

I really enjoyed this, but 12 pages is pretty daunting - it might be a bit more digestible split up

Really good story. Good writing, by the end it's possible to see you knew where this was going all along. The way Ana's point of view is always consistent with her current level of programming makes a lot of sense. The old Ana is always inside, which adds a good tension. Almost no typos, which is always good. Your description of the physical is quite good, too. I also notice how different it reads than "So You Want Answers," which shows range. I'd make only one suggestion, which is to break the story into 3-4 parts when posting something this long online.

Cute ending

I wish to see Kylie and Marcie separate stories. I like it so much and I enjoyed each page. First time i didn’t mind how long the story is, I was happy to read more and I didn’t want it to end. Please write more like this story

So refreshing to read a story where the lass is rescued rather than the endless fire endings of unbroken slavery