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bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
Incredible story

I really thought steve hasa great and saucy story with Laura and Paula together in the pool Im not sure Paula was ready for what Laura had in mind for Paula.

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga.

RealDocRealDocabout 17 years ago
fantastic

totally fantastic.. yeah how about a second and third and fourth chapters

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGalmost 15 years ago
great story

Love it that the story slowly built up and the reluctant wife slowly let her guard down. left some potential for further interaction. Very believable, very well written.

GKShadow515GKShadow515about 1 month ago

Okay, You did it again. Another excellent story!

Also believable.

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The names have been changed to protect the innocent! Some of my stories are true, some are embellished and some are fantasy.