All Comments on 'Freedom Ch. 01'

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EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 13 years ago
Very sweet beginning

This has the makings of a wonderful story. Can't wait to see where it goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

I agree with the first comment. I like all three stories this author has submitted, and have given them all five stars, but in truth the author could be helped by a good editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MORE!!!! :-)

Omg I love this story already! I can't wait to see where these characters go! You should post a new chapter everyday, some people (like myself) would greatly appreciate it. Please and thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
mia

i already love this story and i cant wait to see an update so update soon XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
PLEASE...

... update soon! I love how they didn't make love in the first chapter. This one is great! Hopefully, in later chapters, we can get more of a description of Daniel's appearence too. Thanks for sharing this, and I can't wait to read more!!!

Vestal_VirginVestal_Virginover 13 years ago
Perfect!

I can't wait for more of this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

They didnt have condoms back in the days and soo much more things that you said weren't even invented yet

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
@anon re: condoms

This story takes place during the Civil Rights era. Some research suggests that condoms predate the USA.

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