All Comments on 'Freya'

not bad, a little strange, but still not bad

Your story was very creative, but it's almost just a story outline, rather than a full story. I would have liked to see more character development, meaning some explanation of what the characters are thinking and feeling during all these events so we can see how the events of the story change them. I think you have enough ideas here to flesh it out into 3-4 full pages.

😂😂😂😂😂😂 Thanks, I fucking HATE IT

But there was no build up or attention to detail or anything :\

Despite my issues, the plot is hot and I would love to read a revised version

Disgusting implications about gender and sexuality. 0/10, ruined it for me.