All Comments on 'Friday Night Delights Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

get to the sex already

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
u are taking a good story and dragging it along , for what??

Dragggggggging it aloooooong

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
get it on

good story line but much too long to get to the action

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Your chapters have meaningless tags. All four have been strictly platonic and no sex, all the sexual innuendos and obvious hints at what will happen with no action. She's not a hotwife and it has nothing to do with his BBC or black cock yet. Get on with it and quit dragging things out already

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Friday Night Delights

Enough of my time being wasted there are 4 chpts and nothing, No thanks got better things to do than play. No more reading for me. Hint check out other writers and see how their stories flow etc... and stop wasting people's time

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