by NS_Stories
Pretty transparent. If this or any marriage survives, regular night out with the girls is a nonstarter. A simple recipe for disaster.
Great short tale. Loved the ending even if it was a little. Keek up the good work.
While the premise and theme are good, spelling and word usage is poor.
Seems your translation dictionary is out of date. It doesn't make the grade.
Paragraph one:
Bonnie asked me again if I was going to go out for drinks with the crew after work Friday. I usually turned then down, but I felt like I needed it this week, so I looked at her and said why not! I told her I'd meet them there, and that my husband Jeff would drop me off.