All Comments on 'Friday Night Drinks'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pretty transparent. If this or any marriage survives, regular night out with the girls is a nonstarter. A simple recipe for disaster.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great short tale. Loved the ending even if it was a little. Keek up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

* lose

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

While the premise and theme are good, spelling and word usage is poor.

Seems your translation dictionary is out of date. It doesn't make the grade.

Paragraph one:

Bonnie asked me again if I was going to go out for drinks with the crew after work Friday. I usually turned then down, but I felt like I needed it this week, so I looked at her and said why not! I told her I'd meet them there, and that my husband Jeff would drop me off.

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Re-submitting some stories I wrote 15-20 years ago. Update - have started writing more, love getting feedback, positive or constructive criticism. Don’t forget to vote! 😁

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