All Comments on 'Friday Night Overtime'

by MistressX

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RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 16 years ago
Very hot sex scene.

Your description of the sex was delicious and the story was good, if a bit short. I'd love to read more about these two.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Fun Story

A lot of fun except for the typos. You might want to try using an editor. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
HOT!

THAT WAS SO HOT, GOOD WORK. KEEP WRITING!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Humorously Hot

Well written author - I can see the twinkle in your

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