All Comments on 'Friend Zone'

Not bad but a bit too perfect. Also auditable squeal.

You need a proofreader.

Way too many typos and grammatical errors to even finish reading.

There were many grammar errors so u might want to consider an editor. But other than that this was an excellent beginning if a very good story. I really enjoyed the characters and I can't wait to read how he will finally get past that friend zone.

5 stars.

A good start. A proofreader and a spellcheck would help. Keep at it.

I loved this story - can't wait to read more!!!

Looking forward to more of this tale. Enjoying what you've written thus far.

Enjoyed the story so far. But I do agree with the other comments about typos and an editor. Basic things like Caps on names and at he beginning of sentences. Would make your stories a lot better.

Unfinished waste of time

More to cum- two years ago, ARRGGH!