All Comments on 'Friend Zoned'

by Bluebird8991

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nat1996nat1996almost 3 years ago

Can you make Tyler being less generic?

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 3 years ago

Tyler should have been pissed as hell. Humiliated? Really? I would have told Tina that I have no more respect for her and I can't be her friend anymore. What a terrible story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's a good story. I hope Tyler develops another crush though. Unless they end up having a threesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Sad beginning, wonder if Tyler will be able to let her know.

And he does, will she keep him in the friend zone.

Could see a great argument scene happening.

Don’t let the complainers stop you, you have the basics of a good story, do they break up as friends. Tyler changes a bit, gets more confidence, a little better shape, (his dad hets him a job at a friends place where he doesn’t want to think, just works out the pain etc.)

When they run into each other returning to U next year, what’s the reaction.

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