by AbsintheGrrl
You followed the golden rule of short story writing, keeping it simple. It was erotic and left things just at the right point.
Threesomes can be the greatest!! This is a wonderful tale of just how good they can be.
I loved it and got more and more turned on, incl by narrators mildly hypocritical shyness. Then I learned I'd been involved with your story before. Think I was hotter this time. They were right to drug and tie up this dumb bitch who loved and wanted them, and fuck her silly.