All Comments on 'Friendly Neighbourhood Succubus'

Loved it, what's the chance of a part 2?

Great mix of vulnerability and strength left me wanting more

Great story! Really liked it. Would love to read more about those two

One of the best succubus stories that I have read. Usually with a succubus you get the pleasure but then the potential for becoming a meal. Lili obviously loves Jane but in a sense wants to play with her food. It gives her pleasure and sustenance after all.

I would love to see other episodes such as the ones that Jane remembers near the beginning of the story. So many possibilities with Lili being able to control what other see or remember

At the office...best sex scene you've ever written! More with these characters, please. With admiration, Moon

Might be hard to top this. :-)

Reread this in preparation for the recently released sequel. It holds up. It's so good. I love when the POV character switches or turns tables. I love Lili's oscillation between confident domme and tender lover. I love the contractual, transactional origins of their relationship, the initial casual flatmates relationship, the fact that this eventually becomes something more. Typically not much for romance but the way you arrive at it and the tenor of the dynamic both make it special.

I'm excited to check out the sequel. Thank you for sharing these stories with us!

Such a good story, I love the dynamic of the relationship between Jane and Lili. The latter is still very much a demon, but in this for the long haul and loving her feast of a partner.

This story was so hot! I enjoyed every minute reading this, hands down the best story I’ve ever read. I was a little skeptical about the succubus monster in the beginning from reading the title but I am so glad that I chose to read this. Five stars, keep it up, you know exactly what you’re doing!

Original premise to me and like another commenter expressed,

interesting dynamic between the two .

a very exciting story of succubus monster, turns on

This has quickly become my go-to story when I want to get turned on. Fantastic job!

Absolutely delicious (pun totally intended). I think I'd make a deal with demon too, if this was a sample of the days ahead! Thank you

Loved it! I loved how it was consensual and both parties had a good time without ruining anyone's life. It was a great read!

I enjoyed the story a very nice bit of darkness to it , both enjoyed each other so much and had a great bit of fun

Brilliant!

This was so hot and loving. What a fantastic fantasy. Loved it. Can wait to read the next bit. x