All Comments on 'Friendly Neighbourhood Succubus'

by LibertyMarshmellow98

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Montgomery QuinnMontgomery Quinnalmost 5 years ago
Possible spin off?

Loved it, what's the chance of a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Powerful prose

Great mix of vulnerability and strength left me wanting more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great!

Great story! Really liked it. Would love to read more about those two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Amazing!

One of the best succubus stories that I have read. Usually with a succubus you get the pleasure but then the potential for becoming a meal. Lili obviously loves Jane but in a sense wants to play with her food. It gives her pleasure and sustenance after all.

I would love to see other episodes such as the ones that Jane remembers near the beginning of the story. So many possibilities with Lili being able to control what other see or remember

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
FN Succubus

At the office...best sex scene you've ever written! More with these characters, please. With admiration, Moon

SciFurzSciFurzover 4 years ago
The trouble with a sequel..

Might be hard to top this. :-)

Rambling_ChantrixRambling_Chantrixabout 4 years ago

Reread this in preparation for the recently released sequel. It holds up. It's so good. I love when the POV character switches or turns tables. I love Lili's oscillation between confident domme and tender lover. I love the contractual, transactional origins of their relationship, the initial casual flatmates relationship, the fact that this eventually becomes something more. Typically not much for romance but the way you arrive at it and the tenor of the dynamic both make it special.

I'm excited to check out the sequel. Thank you for sharing these stories with us!

SerrowynSerrowynalmost 4 years ago
Amazing

Such a good story, I love the dynamic of the relationship between Jane and Lili. The latter is still very much a demon, but in this for the long haul and loving her feast of a partner.

wiredNtired786wiredNtired786over 3 years ago

This story was so hot! I enjoyed every minute reading this, hands down the best story I’ve ever read. I was a little skeptical about the succubus monster in the beginning from reading the title but I am so glad that I chose to read this. Five stars, keep it up, you know exactly what you’re doing!

ReadatworkReadatworkover 3 years ago
Original

Original premise to me and like another commenter expressed,

interesting dynamic between the two .

gpetagpetaover 3 years ago

a very exciting story of succubus monster, turns on

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This has quickly become my go-to story when I want to get turned on. Fantastic job!

ShandrahShandrahover 2 years ago

Absolutely delicious (pun totally intended). I think I'd make a deal with demon too, if this was a sample of the days ahead! Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it! I loved how it was consensual and both parties had a good time without ruining anyone's life. It was a great read!

MsVanilla69MsVanilla693 months ago

I enjoyed the story a very nice bit of darkness to it , both enjoyed each other so much and had a great bit of fun

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