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Hey friendly, how did you like that mo fo coming at you last night? DEEZ NUTS!

in the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=18642707#post18642707

Please spend some more time developing the story. This one should have described the relaionship between the wife and the guest a bit more and you should have continued with how the husband was going to handle the situation.

Damn another pathetic male humiliator - a helpless watcher who jacksoff to his friends beeg cock - runs as not be caught watching by her and him but "oh my" doesn't know what to do besides shoot himself cuz he is a self imposed cuckold!

So writer is that what you intended - a wimp story of a writer demeaned freak male into helpless humiliation by his bestest beeg cocked friend and his wife whore.

Pretty sick stuff for a small - really few readers into pathetic male humiliation like Bazzie who suggests - "develope the plot by having him in a frilly apron with pink fuzzy slippers and his cock fluffer kneepads - saves the knees when sucking beeg cocks up and her cock cum out".

The Bazzie knows from experience how this works so you can't go rite with him just the way you want it eh ruffie.

Gosh get a life then write something arousing as opposed to sickly below human convention like this wimpstering out your wife!

But dropped me like a hot potato and smashed my high.What a bad place to stop. Needed some fucking.But dont pay any attention to me for I am to disappointed to offer a fair rating for your story.The wife sounds very sexy and a fuckable hot assed pussy.Forgive and forget for it has prosmise for the next chapter.okdeacon

Great Start Can't wait till the next chapter

Hot story. Pity you have not continued it.

Queer get off seeing a big dick.

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