by ElderDirt
Nicely wrapped up. What a family force you have created, plenty of characters and prospective opportunities for a creative writer to plum for anchors to hang future stories on. Sad though that Junie Comstock has taken dad off to Florida, that closes off one opportunity, particularly as Olivia got on so well with her. I like your style of writing and your first person conversations and commentary. Also the humour that runs throughout both parts is very entertaining, I will continue to be a fan and look forward to future output from you. Bob
A sweet story that wraps up a nice story of friends becoming lovers and more. Another chapter?