All Comments on 'Friends Come to Visit Pt. 01'

This story is OK but I doubt it is going anywhere but down, or at best sideways. I suggest you end it here.

...I cannot see this story going anywhere else but down..Do not mean you evil, but there is absolutely no meat in this soup.

A "De Facto" cuckold...1*

Cuck fetish belongs in Fetish, also a dose of reality therapy might help

Not a LW story.

Leroy? You do realize this is the antithesis of erotic.Just sad poorly written trailer porn.

Great read and good sex story about a LW!@

and look forward to when you decided you had enough and what you did about it. At least at this point you are still getting some good sex, so all is not lost.

Since neither were evident, that's the most logical rating.

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BTW, a warning that is given AFTER opening a story is worthless. Too little, too late.

I would guess that De Facto is the Brit equivalent to Common Law. No license or cerificate, but recognized for inheritance or tax purposes! The separate bedroom issue is a personal (guessing - disgruntled Sweetie) decision.

Agree that it is pretty clear that Ch1 is the last time/night that DF Hubby will get any tail in THIS tale. Sweetie will likely 'run the (billiard) table!'. Run that table 'around the world' with each visitor for a great (for DF Sweetie & visitors) week, I'd assume!

The sex scenes (with DF Hubby, at least) were hot. The future looks bleaker than I prefer!

Your shit stinks.

This was simply horrible writing, even for a fictional porn story. Nothing erotic, interesting or fun to read. UGH!

If de facto hadnt been giving me any lately i would have done some screwing when i got the chance rather than a hand job.

Turned on by all of your stories. Keep them coming!

Appears to be used in Australia. I'm not sure if it gets any traction outside of that country. Certainly not in Canada or the US. Common law would be the term used here.

There is no explanation as to why a "wife" would have a separate bedroom and the story just didn't move all that well. 2*

Just as bad as predicted. Cucks suck, even down under.

I see no further stories from this author. Hopefully that means that he has thrown the slut to the curb. Along with getting rid of the bitch he also needs to cull those he calls his friends. Real friends do not have sex with the buds girl no matter how enticing she appears. I hope to enjoy this author further stories in the future. LP