All Comments on 'Friends with Consequences Ch. 08-09'

Wow

This was an emotionally intense chapter. My heart was breaking for Max but you've actually made me feel bad for Linda as well. Allie seems like a great match for Max but that Jake guy is a douche.

Keep up the good work! This was one of the most dramatic chapters I have read in a long time.

P.s. The poetry was a very nice touch!

Crazy chapters! I love that you put these two chapters together. I would have been so angry if you just left me with chapter 8!

Some of the structure and italics changed when it was published. Sorry if you find parts of it confusing.

A great read. Linda is a real piece of work. I hope she comes around but I'm not sure she deserves him.

This story isn't over.

Loved it. One of my faves. Looking forward to the next chapter

Between this and Jane in New York I can't wait for your upcoming chapters!

Can’t wait to find out what happens next!

Pi** on Linda! Max needs to cut and run straight to Allie.

Unfortunately, this story will be on the back burner for a little while. I'm working hard right now on the big finale for Jane in New York. After that, I will get back to it. Thanks for your patience!

What can I say anymore? My heart is already broken before I read one chapter.

Get your shoes on, guys.

Did you didn't see that CHEATING tag?

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Sorry but linda belongs to the streets