All Comments on 'Frivolous Fantasy Diaries - Mother'

by KMDawn

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Your story sounds real! "She pulled the front of her panties away and slipped his hand in. His fingers brushed against her lightly trimmed hair, so he pulled away again. 'Mum!'" If mom had been shaved, I would have rated your story a 1 (shaved pussy is too unrealistic on a 40-year-old mom character) instead of the 5 I gave you for mom's lightly trimmed hairy pussy.

The author descriptions of him masturbating his mom are excellent! Good writing. I will look at some other stories by this author.

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K M Dawn lives near the sea and loves nothing more than an evening walk with her Cocker Spaniel Howie. She paints landscapes in her spare time, when she is not losing herself in her next frivolous encounter, and finds a good chunk of milk chocolate slowly melting on the tongue...