All Comments on 'From a View to a Thrill'

I read the story and enjoyed it a great deal. I wanted there to be more of this tale. Totally guessing here, but I think the text is less than a thousand words, so I'm assuming you wrote for some challenge. If it was, you probably should have included that before the story began. For such a brief tale, it was highly stimulating but left me randy and in need. If your goal was to leave me wanting more, job well done. Next time you have one so, very short, please tell us why.

Tthe hubris of a lot of writers' is turned back on them by this short and sweet, little ,.neat and tidy story .Really wonder what 3-6 pages can do for the reader a lot of the time . I tips my lid to Hemmingway once again.....

Your story captures the allure..and the compulsion…of being a voyeur: that sense of waiting for the right combination of opportunities to see something intimate and arousing, as well as the wonder and story telling that fills the gaps in what you witness.

Choosing to keep the word count low is perfect, because these “encounters” tend to be brief.

Well done!

Neat, sexy little story!

Just catching up on your work and I thoroughly enjoyed this. For a 750 story it’s compact and well paced, really builds up the “heat” well.