All Comments on 'From Bradley to Brendalee43'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very promising story, except for the cage bit and hope you will share a chapter 2 with us.

njlaurennjlauren3 months ago

Interesting start. One thing I recommend is don't make the chapters so short, it works better if there is more to it. It is ok to have a cliffhanger, but not when it is this short.

PinkPanties4mePinkPanties4me3 months ago

Keep going , just take your time and let the story build slowly….

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As it's almost 2 years since I first came to Lit, time to update and share a little personal info. The first 43 years of my life were the vanilla of vanilla. Married 20 years, Claire (my late wife) found my secret side. I was sure she'd leave me but she didn't after some enc...