All Comments on 'From Bullies to Slaves Pt. 01'

by riririri

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ugh. Think about *time*.

They are 18 or 19. She is 20 or 21. She had a scholarship to a university. Did she drop out or something, because she should still be there. This smells like a story with the serial numbers filed off, because the character perspectives and attitudes are completely wrong. She's acting more like a 30-40 year old man than a woman in her early twenties. Three year age difference? Yeah, no, they should recognize her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Can't wait for the chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful!!!!

Great story, can't wait for the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fantastic! Loved the bondage!

StrappingManStrappingManover 3 years ago

The coincidences we write in our fantasy stories. I do agree that unless she had surgery the other two should have recognized her, if not immediately, then shortly thereafter. I'm still giving this a five due to our protagonist's sheer audacity of going all Bates on these girls

research_loverresearch_loverover 3 years ago

Hope you continue to write

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 3 years ago

Interesting start, but the mechanics seem uneven. Like, Allie has been down there for 2 days and has only been hosed off...ew, she's gotta be ripe. On to the next chapter!

maddictmaddictover 2 years ago

I think Allie is going to end up dominating her friend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Really great story

maitreculmaitreculover 1 year ago

Very hot. Can't wait for the next installment. Bully sluts got what they deserved.

CorderoCordero10 months ago

Part one had me rivited to the story! Sadistic but so enjoyable to read.

On to part two 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Please learn what "masturbate" means. It is not possible for a person to be masturbated by someone else. They can get a hand job from someone else, but not masturbated by someone else.

LunaDoggyLunaDoggy4 days ago

WOW! Now THAT is what 'payback' means! And Allie and Chloe thoroughly deserve it, best thing being, they don't KNOW who has now turned the tables on them.

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