by riririri
They are 18 or 19. She is 20 or 21. She had a scholarship to a university. Did she drop out or something, because she should still be there. This smells like a story with the serial numbers filed off, because the character perspectives and attitudes are completely wrong. She's acting more like a 30-40 year old man than a woman in her early twenties. Three year age difference? Yeah, no, they should recognize her.
The coincidences we write in our fantasy stories. I do agree that unless she had surgery the other two should have recognized her, if not immediately, then shortly thereafter. I'm still giving this a five due to our protagonist's sheer audacity of going all Bates on these girls
Interesting start, but the mechanics seem uneven. Like, Allie has been down there for 2 days and has only been hosed off...ew, she's gotta be ripe. On to the next chapter!
Very hot. Can't wait for the next installment. Bully sluts got what they deserved.
Part one had me rivited to the story! Sadistic but so enjoyable to read.
On to part two 😊
Please learn what "masturbate" means. It is not possible for a person to be masturbated by someone else. They can get a hand job from someone else, but not masturbated by someone else.
WOW! Now THAT is what 'payback' means! And Allie and Chloe thoroughly deserve it, best thing being, they don't KNOW who has now turned the tables on them.