All Comments on 'From Claire to Davina Pt. 01-02'

by ernesto77

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justincbenedictjustincbenedictalmost 4 years ago
That's wonderful

full of detail. My own writing is a bit cartoonish in contrast. Still somewhat aroused by August's image!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
story

just another cuck-a-doddle-do story with a whore wife get a life

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 4 years ago
Loved it!

Looking forward to see where she leads him!

ernesto77ernesto77almost 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the kind feedback as for negative feedback I showed my wife and we had a good laugh. Well done, that was funny even if you were writing it from your parents basement !

ernesto77ernesto77almost 4 years agoAuthor

I’m just kidding about parents basement. I probably discovered this site while living there. I welcome all feedback. Thanks for reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
So hot

I could barely hold back as I stroked my pathetic excuse for a cock. I just wish I could be the slave to this powerful Goddess.

greenman440greenman440almost 4 years ago
Wow, it's all in there

Ch1 and he's already in chastity, ass licking, told he's to be cucked and working as a household servant. At this rate in a couple of chapters she'll have him eating her creampies, a full time sissy, taking cock in both ends, then castrated and eating on the floor out of a dog bowl. Seemingly he will be.... "really angry" but do it anyway.

Kinda unrealistic as a fantasy for me, particularly since his original crime was basically just looking at another woman.

ernesto77ernesto77almost 4 years agoAuthor

All good feedback thanks.

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