All Comments on 'From Darkness Ch. 01'

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DazbootDazbootalmost 9 years ago
Great start!

There were a few odd grammatical issues but great start! Hope you keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hero or villian i would like to find out

A very interesting story beginning, im curious to find out what happens. and i hope cathy doesnt entirly dissappear since her hinting kale down in a complete rage for leaving her would be entertaining.

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