All Comments on 'From Fantasy to Reality'

by Revan7

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Paul PinesPaul Pinesover 2 years ago

This might be a good story, but your use of exclamation points makes it unreadable. Use quotation marks for conversations, not exclamation! points!

I hope you try again.

Sincerely,

Cuckold Paul

Masters_SlavesMasters_Slavesover 2 years ago

Please I hope there will be a second chapter to this story....it was so so good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

that was a great story well written love the wifes point of view also

AhboomAhboomabout 1 month ago

Amazing. I love that they still had a loving marriage and were able to do it together rather than. Forced humiliation or submission is a turn off at times

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I'd love to hear feed back on my stories so please comment on them And I'd love to hear what turns you on the most. Maybe it could help me with future stories. I'd also like to hear experiences you've had and what turns you on the most.