All Comments on 'From Hookups to More... Pt. 01'

hmmm, more please

I know the regular trolls will put down the fantasy of this story, BUT, that is what readers like me desire. I want to be able to live my wishes out when I read. This was a very good story. It is beyond reality, but that is the hope. Desire that I could be a woman who finds a loving Master to used me. Please do not drop this story, I need to have this tale continue.

A good start, looking forward to see how this might develop

That last bit was way over the top. Who says that and means it, really????

But it’s your story and lm enjoying it.

4/5

I rather liked your story & scenario. It has some very interesting ideas. 4/5

My criticism is that He didnt try anything with slave Kylee that made her wish that she had a safeword to use.

I am more worried about the direction of "I want you to make me a brainwashed sex slave," than excited read about what will happen. I have No idea what Kylee is expecting to be brainwashed.

Can I get permission (or) Do I have permission to start with this story & character setup. But change & edit things that I want? [ I was hoping Kylee would have a fantasy of wanting to indulge in a rape fantasy. Kylee body is used without a safeword. Maybe gets throat fucked and throatpied. ]

Reading for the second time and is still awesome but again I can't get past the "California kind bed" line without laughing. It's not bigger than a regular king, just more skinny and longer. It's a tall ppl mattress not a group sex mattress.

“I know I wasn’t fat or ugly as only rich fat ugly guys could get girls like Kylee.”

Makes 300K+ and is a trust fund baby with multiple luxury cars and his own apartment downtown… bud, you just played yourself.

Cutting comment by anonymous about the money. Life is difficult, I never understand what women see in men. It just feels so random. Being rich helps, being a hunk helps. Somehow men who are neither get the girl too, sometimes.