by McWrites97
This is a very Romantic Kinky Love Story. I would love to be sexy and desired like the women in the story. I also would love to be Kylee. Becoming a loved own slave is my wish.
Loved the story overall! But honestly it’s a massive let down be didn’t permanently enslave Kylee.
She was the one who really wanted to be his permanently controlled slave girl, and then she ends up being the only woman there who isn’t permanently controlled.
If it was just the 2 of them it’d be a little anticlimatic but ‘realistic’ ending up at a ‘normal’ but kinky relationship long term.
But surrounded by all the others who are now quite happily permanent slave girls, while she alone isn’t…. just feels like a disappointing end and falls a bit flat.
I just don’t understand why you had to involve his friends. It ruins the story. The ex not being his slave is also kinda weird.