All Comments on 'From Husband to Wife'

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sissynewbiesissynewbieover 3 years ago

I always love stories about husband feminised by wife. Wardrobe change, getting drunk and not remembering sucking a cock - that's so cool!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very good...

A few typos such as albeit. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

Is there a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved it

This is a fantasy dream I frequently have for myself. While many may think I'm weird, the thought of having my wife fully feminise me is the ultimate for me.

Knowing what I now know about myself I would have found a different partner.

A guy can dream...

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 3 years ago

Truly disgusting. If he had all this done with his full knowledge, that would have been different. His wife is the asshole of the century and such a little bitch having all these things done to him without his consent, he should sue her pants off. Even if they still love each other, she's changing him in ways he will never be himself again.

eviltwin52eviltwin52over 3 years ago
Very good story

Well written. Don't know if you meant parts to be humorous but: "and 6 very lacy matching thongs for dressing up to go out. I was wondering when she was going to get something for me." I found that part hilarious. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

His wife drugged him, had him raped, got off on almost causing death by asphyxia, engaged in a threesome with the rapists while "more of a lesbian that straight", made a video for leverage, and Daddy is complicit. Run Danny Run.

njlaurennjlaurenover 3 years ago
Half good

The problem is why is she such a bitch to Dani? And why the hell would she drug Dani and basically have him raped? That part I didn't find erotic, Linda comes off as mentally ill to be honest. The ending was cute but didn't match the ending, is the rest going to be this schizophrenic?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved it!

Pls write a Part 2 and let’s get Dani a lover.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Outstanding start

Very, very good, and not traveling down the usual predictable roads some of these stories tend to follow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love to hear more

However took long time to unfold but want to see where it goes from here

JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 3 years ago

I never could have got past the lying, manipulation, drugging and rape. She would be dead to me.

aboychickaboychickover 3 years ago
Good read!

I wish all people would understand that this is a story, as in fiction, as in the (excellent) work of an author. And, that you're posting this to all readers for their enjoyment. Hang in there, and I hope you continue to be well. As for the story, it certainly kept my interest through all three screens, and I'm looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wtf

I'm still in a 'wtf did I just read mode' main character should have walked away

Synthia44Synthia44over 3 years ago
AGREE

I have to agree with Jessica. Trust in ANY relationship is crucial. I could never get past the rape or the lies.

TanalizeTanalizeover 3 years ago

This is disgusting

If you want to be gay then just be gay

leave women out of this mental forced gay fantasy of yours

Can't wait until 30 years when you're no longer going to be around

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
not my cup of tea butt dont let haters bother you bro

lol Tanalize needs to chill

im sure many ppl were down with this story

CowbytrkdrCowbytrkdrover 3 years ago
Wow

I wish my wife would want to do this. Fucking so hot!

AlexsocalAlexsocalover 3 years ago
Interesting Stort

Pretty cool story and good writing.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 3 years ago

Really good story. Nicely told. Thanks for sharing your talents & skills. Mmmm, I see you have Ch 02 ready. Hmm, before I go...

To help folks better understand the characters, consider those personality tests mentioned at the beginning of the story. Personality Types or Character Traits in those tests are scored from low to high, and the various scores and Traits/Types come together in a sort-of special mix that reflects each of our individuality. So, say, each of us would have a Loyalty score, but only very few would score extremely high or low. Anyway, to the characters.

Danny preferred to work alone, was self sufficient, had an aptitude for computers, and his personality was geared towards pleasing others. Working alone/self-sufficient might imply that when he has a choice he doesn't care what others think. Pleasing others: it doesn't have to mean All others, and could easily mean Others according to their level of importance in his life. And Linda was always his bull's eye, top-of-the-heap, full stop. Even when he was keeping his distance from her, even when he felt hurt, angry and betrayed, he was devoted to Linda -always.

Linda was more focused and driven, had an analytical mind, and was more commanding. So, more likely to pursue a focused course of action, maybe not seek other opinion if she thinks she's right, and command rather than explain and get buy-in. You know, damn-the-torpedoes kind of woman. That's exactly how she was portrayed. Yeah, she would have lost a bunch of other people, if they'd been her husband. That misses the point; they weren't, Danny was.

Y'all be well.

julian069julian069about 3 years ago

Lovely Fantasy, nicely token! Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Manipulative bitch & wimp husband. Typical Lit storyline.

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 3 years ago

i enjoyed this, it should have been obvious, but even from the start this was so good. solid 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Let me try to understand. She sets this poor little dude up to be drugged and raped on film simply for her amusement and laughs about it. Then, is amazed and ‘upset’ when when he is not cool with it and in fact becomes physically ill. He just wants to love her and have her love him and she gets him raped, then laughs about it, for his trouble. “I’m sorry, I just wanted girlfriend”, she says. Yeah, I’ll bet! All her genetically female acquaintances are probably afraid to turn their backs on her. She’s a a sociopath, plain and simple, taking advantage of (obviously) a gentle, trusting little soul. He should use the often mentioned covert computer access, get the disgusting film evidence and coerce Daddy out of some cash. He’ll pay, just to keep princess out of jail, he’s no real threat as written in the story, anyway

Then he/she/it can move far away and pursue a life with an equal, caring partner of his choice.

Good luck little buddy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

ok no just no make your mind yo

Does he eant it or not you did a 180 with less than 5% of the story left

Last act in the nutshell

Im mad im mad im mad you unforgivable but lets do somthing 100 times more perminent in the same direction

What the happened at the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

not sure why he is still living with the whore after what she and the men did to him he needs to toss the cunt to the curb and get on with life without her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I'm sorry, this is one of the dumbest story's I've read. He isn't gay and doesn't like what's happening, but he goes along with everything the wife is doing to him for love? NO! He's obviously a wimp, but no one, even a spineless wimp, would go along with such a conversion, without even pumping the brakes, if he wasn't gay. That means he wouldn't care for his wife. So the story contradicts itself.

vickitvohiovickitvohioover 1 year ago

stop here. chapter two is WORSE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What's happening is hot, but why doesn't any of your characters act like a human?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If I was him I would run not walk as fast as I could away from that untrustworthy lying bitch. She already drugged and helped have you raped. Plus keep lying to you about transitioning you into a girl. Sure she’ll agree to anything to get you to cut off your cock and grow her some breast. Do trust her or her dad, he’s probably fucking her. And what man would stay married to a wife that never ever putout after your marriage??

Gothic5Gothic54 months ago

Frankly speaking, one of the crappiest stories I’ve read.

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