All Comments on 'From Loving Wife to Stripper Pt. 01'

by flashgordon562006

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
done before?

Was this a repost? I thought I read this before.

Anyway, the guy is very relaxed at his wife offering to blow the groom at the party so I am guessing in her prior life as a dancer she often did the sex on the side bit and he is OK with a whore for a wife.

Makes it kind of a ho hum story.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 4 years ago

Ugh, another SHORT one page chapter one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yep, that was only the second to the last thing you said

The last was, and when you are done, send me 25,000 and never come home again.

muncher354muncher354about 4 years ago
Lol

Yeah because someone is gonna pay a random stripper 50k for sex they can get for a few hundred

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

A colleague's girl friend was also a real show off just like Suzy,.

She was about 28, blonde, quite cute and very happy at the sports club pool to slip off her bikini bra and turned her bikini bottom into a thong around friends, her boyfriend's colleagues and his key clients. It was south-central Europe and topless was allowed around the expats' club pool area. She was a very smart local (with a science degree ) and was naturally comfortable topless

She typically even went to the line up for ice-cream wearing just her newly created thong. It was enjoyable as she was gorgeous and so completely relaxed about bring mostly undressed. I can remember standing with her in the line-up for ice cream and she was wearing just her rolled down bikini bottom as a cute thong with the top of her pubes showing. Her boobs were tanned and perky; her nips were erect and her tummy was flat

She knew i enjoyed the view and flirted by saying "Oh, I have a scratch right here" pointing out a tiny scratch between her pubes and her navel.

I am sure she would have been an enthusiastic stripper for an event, but I just enjoyed seeing her undressed at the pool.

KingBandorKingBandorabout 4 years ago

Sorry if I am ignorant and uninformed, but what is a "gypsy on Broadway"?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Short and sweet

Sure, the plot has been done before a few times, but you know why? Because its a hot scenario. Thousands of guys would love to see their wives strip for a bachelor party. It's a great little story also because it pisses off the sad little whiny trolls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
You left out a couple of words

Her response - "No thanks". The end. Laughably bad.

DAPSlittlelady50DAPSlittlelady50about 4 years ago
Very interesting!

Looking forward to reading how her night goes.

rodryder44rodryder44about 4 years ago
Stop being critical

Sure, we've seen this before, but it's always amusing when the clueless cuck has to let his wife explore her slutty side. Will she ever go back to her kitchen chores?

Denny CraneDenny Craneabout 4 years ago
50k?

For 50K you could hire a fleet of high-priced, model-hot call girls and played a sexual version of Duck Duck Goose all night. Odd cock out.

fifteen16fifteen16about 4 years ago
Constructive

Yes i liked the story but i have some constructive criticism. It was a little bit documentary in the telling, i thought there should be more apprehension by the husband. The rock and a hard place situation, does not want to upset his boss but his wife stripping off at a bachelor party, What to do, what to do, her willingness to perform was to easy, why is she so eager he might wonder. Is the money offered here plausible, don't know, have never organised such a party. There is more to be had from this couple but more drama and angst would make it better. Am not being a killjoy, i liked this and hope the writer continues with this couple.

KingBandorKingBandorabout 4 years ago

I will just treat this like a fantasy instead of semi-realistic. Because, nobody is going to pay a stripper $20,000, let alone $50,000 to fuck. You could get two of them to do it for 1/10th that price, easily.

Plus what kind of father wants his daughter's husband to fuck unknown hookers just before marrying his daughter?

KB

TajfaTajfaabout 4 years ago

Maybe he knows it's his wife and wants to see how far he will go?

flashgordon562006flashgordon562006about 4 years agoAuthor
Gypsy

A gypsy on Broadway is a dancer that goes from show to show, usually in the chorus line.

49ers6949ers69about 2 months ago

It was a good start to a potentially great story, but you can't leave us hangin like that.

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