by frisky50
A slow build up can hurt a story. Not this one. Great first effort.
Applause, applause!
I liked the build up, smoothly paced. I think it was a pretty good story... got this old man leaking pre-cum after reading it. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Being a switch, it is sometimes rewarding to give up control for a night, or a weekend
Excellent, strongly encourage you to continue, you have realized just the right tone.
Thanks for the positive comments and encouragement. I am actually working on something else right now!
That was a good delayed climax don sub story. I think it was excellent writing and I enjoyed it. It would be nice if you had explained why Christy lost her sex drive and what had happened to her. The menopause didn’t turn off her desire, so was it boredom or something else?
Enjoyable. Social envelope pushing with sexy temptations. ~ Look and touch but,... DON'T climax!!!