by jackie_em
Loved the fictional story. It is unusual to read a complete story. Thank you.
I liked the story but it came out like a Whap, whap, whap, of facts and comments. I'd like to read a second version with a bit more emotion. 3 stars.
"Circumstances take us places we'd never have expected to go."
Interesting twist of fate. An enjoyable read for lot of women who share non-consensual fantasies...God forbit anything like it ever happening.
Well written, a bit of a twist and turn plot. I was hoping along the way for a further chapter or two, but that is not possible now.
The story is generally well-written; however, the only complaints I have is that she fell too quickly, or at least her body did. I would've liked to read about more of a struggle. And furthermore, the sex was just too quick. It was entirely a wam bam thank you mam. I thought there were other parts that were just unrealistic, but it's fine. It's your story. I still enjoyed it, I guess.
A truly fantastic piece of literary erotica. Thank you for writing this.
heyall
It's 5 stars from me.
But I don't understand her family's point of view.
Perhaps it's the European man I am that is unable to imagine American reaction towards prostitution.
And the next story is where she turns his men against him and either enslaves him or kills him. I hate it when the villain wins, but even so, it's still a really great story.
I enjoyed this. Just wished she got some revenge on her a-hole father. No father should treat his daughter like that.
So some anonymous person deemed this horrible. My blurb says Marci is kidnapped and sex trafficked and my warning says "this is a very dark story including non-con sex, humiliation, prostitution, incest, and sex trafficking."
What the hell did you expect? Sweetness and light?