All Comments on 'From Sister to Whore Ch. 03'

The story line is great, but it should have been played out longer, and been much more decriptive

You have a great start to your stories but you really need more detail and more story to it....

While I did love the general idea and plotline of all of the chapters in the series, they all moved too quickly, with not enough detail. In chapters 1 and 2 and somewhat 3, the endings were to abrupt. Overall a good story, however they could definately use a bit of work.

I enjoyed this series. I was secretly hoping the brother would enjoy Jessica's breast feeding her son - since there is usually milk enough for two.

Next time try to make it a bit longer :\