All Comments on 'From the Ashes'

Wow this story was wonderful. And you're an amazing writer. Hope to see more from you!

Poignant!

Such lovely writing, deep characterization! And your first story, apparently - wow! I look forward to seeing more from you.

I apologize for how little this is, but *****.

What an amazing first story.

very good.

BTW, I'm diggin the A C Doyle reference

Great first story!

5

Great Writing

Hoping there are many more good stories like your first to come.

*****Great read. Thanks for sharing.

A superb story! Thank you for sharing this. I hope you are continue to write. Five well-deserved stars.

Excellent job. It turned out great!

Damn, but that was good!

What a beautiful story! Congratulations on your first. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

It doesn't happen often, but this to me is one of those stories that you want to keep on reading and feeling. Small tear drops in the corner of my eyes. Thank you.

That was just fabulous! Thank you for giving us that glimpse into the hearts of two wonderful people. Carry on!

Yours is some of the best writing I have witnessed, after many years on this site, and several others. So poignant, so well drawn out! Please consider writing more for us. You are greatly appreciated.