All Comments on 'From the Ashes'

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Areala-chanAreala-chan5 days ago

That's one hell of an entrance for a first-timer here! I better not catch this one being your last, you big softie. :)

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Yours is some of the best writing I have witnessed, after many years on this site, and several others. So poignant, so well drawn out! Please consider writing more for us. You are greatly appreciated.

AnotherChapterAnotherChapter10 months ago

That was just fabulous! Thank you for giving us that glimpse into the hearts of two wonderful people. Carry on!

GerMagGerMag10 months ago

It doesn't happen often, but this to me is one of those stories that you want to keep on reading and feeling. Small tear drops in the corner of my eyes. Thank you.

Davester37Davester3710 months ago

What a beautiful story! Congratulations on your first. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Damn, but that was good!

AimEnigmaClickAimEnigmaClick10 months ago

Excellent job. It turned out great!

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirens10 months ago

A superb story! Thank you for sharing this. I hope you are continue to write. Five well-deserved stars.

chytownchytown10 months ago

*****Great read. Thanks for sharing.

stewartbstewartb10 months ago

Hoping there are many more good stories like your first to come.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy10 months ago

Great first story!

5

TheArtfulCodgerTheArtfulCodger10 months ago

BTW, I'm diggin the A C Doyle reference

JJ1961JJ196110 months ago

What an amazing first story.

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPenny10 months ago

Such lovely writing, deep characterization! And your first story, apparently - wow! I look forward to seeing more from you.

I apologize for how little this is, but *****.

Jackie.HikaruJackie.Hikaru10 months ago

Wow this story was wonderful. And you're an amazing writer. Hope to see more from you!

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I just like to read. From tortured detectives to spoiled cheerleaders and everything in between.