All Comments on 'From the Bottom to the Top Ch. 02-03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Like your writing keep going great story glad the nerd finally takes charge, good to see a different type of storie on the site

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved the story and how you are writing it; it may be in the "novels" category but the pages fly by as I'm reading and before I know it the story is done. You do a good job of fleshing out a complex family, and even though it's a ridiculous scenario I enjoy reading fantasies about hung teens surrounded by hotties that all want to get into his lycra shorts. I'm looking forward to more chapters and the developing plot as Tom exacts his revenge on Ricky, who now appears to be the main antagonist. This is hard-on inducing to say the least!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Leave us oceansiders alone😭 (depends which oceanside u were talking abt)

OverconfidentSarcasmOverconfidentSarcasmover 1 year ago

MC: "I hate you all for neglecting, humiliating, ridiculing, and hurting me for all my life!"

Mom: "That was before your Aunt talked about your 14-inch cock. Look, I have tits!"

MC: "I never stopped loving you!"

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So much wasted potential.

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