All Comments on 'Frozen Moments'

by AverageBloke

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MitchFraellMitchFraellalmost 10 years ago
Nice

Very enjoyable and no need to explain how the frozen moment happened. It could easily happen again in other circumstances.

bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago
Nicely done

Enjoyed this one. Not overdone, believable within a fantasy frame.

RedRobin007RedRobin007almost 10 years ago
Very good.

Keep doing what you do

PerilEyesPerilEyesalmost 10 years ago
Love a good time stop story

Thanks for sharing!

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 10 years ago
Really entertaining story, but

I hope that you plan to continue!

DrmaxcDrmaxcalmost 2 years ago

Excellent. Really well done, But alas, a lost author so nothing more to come of this.

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