All Comments on 'Fuck Marathon with the Maid'

This is basically unreadable, due to so many mistakes in the text.

The story suffers from the failure of the author to use the standard common term known by anyone older than early grade school.

Its CUM for orgasm/semen/sperm NOT REPEAT NOT COME; this removes confusion in what is meant.

Couldn't finish the story, the grammar is awful! I expect some imperfections, but poor spelling and word use make it confusing and distracts the reader making it difficult to follow the story!

Im sorry if some cant see that this is not a novel, but it’s a descriptive story which are all events as they happened at the time of writing…

True story