by nightowl94
This one wasn't my thing. I didn't give a star reviewer because I didn't finish it. I hope you try again.
I don't know what the author was thinking. This is something that a juvenile inexperienced person would write. There was nothing good about it. The whole "Beg me to piss on you" thing was what made this so bad. Then her "punishment" for moving while she was being pissed on was just atrocious. Whomever wrote this needs to get creative and definitely get more descriptive. This story is one of the worst that I've ever read.