All Comments on 'Fucking Her Friend's Son'

Give it up

I kept thinking of Simon, being played by Pee-wee Herman. And narrated by Kelsey Grammer, who plays Frazier and Sideshow Bob on The Simpsons.---------------- Anyways, I thought the female protagonist was way too horny. Not to say that there are no nymphomaniacs in the world. I still gave it 5☆.

Tell the anonymous commenter to f*** off.

Sure there are issues with the story but it read okay and you have put the point across clearly and obviously.

The one thing that totally bollocks the story was the last line, the one line too many. It should have simply not been there.

That line should be a chapter or two along the story. It took me 12 chapters of 'Dreaming Of A White Christmas' although I freely admit that wasn't part of the story line when I started the series.

Not interesting.

I feel the story ended too quickly. Yes, she had him as a toy boy but more could and should have been told. We can imagine she kept him home and ruled the house. I wanted to see how much the author would write about his submission to her and the mother’s reaction to their marriage….

Several years later, Serena proposes to Simon and the two of them got married.

Really? Kind of like a crash test ending. But keep on writing, you'll get the hang of it.

Stupid as fuck!

You could have starched the story out some more. Sorry only Three stars

It is a good story but for once I would like to see a story where a mother will be pleased because her son and friend are wonderful people and the great friend will be an ideal daughter-in-law.