by pink_silk_glove
I found myself totally immersed in this story, So vivid as if i was there, In a nearby doorway, watching, captivated, aroused. It should not be available to the masses for free
The first of your stories I've read and found it hot! hot! hot!. I love a woman's pov of erotica and yours is great. Love the twist at the end. . More please!
Wonderful, descriptive, I felt like it was a 2 way mirror, and I was watching you. Talented as always,
Great story except for the ending, worthy of Mills and Boon. Neat but nothing for the author to be proud of, a possible cloud over her life.
Let's just have a sexy story - which is incredibly erotic when it has the feeling of a real event, as this one does.