All Comments on 'Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 03'

Ok base is set , now he needs to fuck everybody, and even start orgies in his neibouhood .... Get people who hate each other to fuck each other

Some parts of your story are garbled by unnecessary and repetitive details and some details are not clear. One detail in particular is the aunt talking about having sex with his father... OK so what happened there? Did they have an affair, did the aunt have sex with him after he divorced the mom, did this happen before the marriage... I have no idea. Having dialogue about important events that the monologue doesn't ever explain is pretty frustrating for the reader or maybe it's just me.