Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 10

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"Fuck! Fuck I'm coming!" I screamed and both of us moved at once to mash our lips together, not really a kiss but that was what she wanted when I did it.

"OOMEGAHHHHHHHH!" It was like her orgasm started all over again. I knew it was the first time she'd let a guy come inside her without a condom, she was on the pill but she'd always been doubly safe before. She'd wanted to let other guys do it, because the idea of having a pussy full of cum grew more and more thrilling. Having it come true, after the rimming fantasy came true (and lived up to the hype!) rocketed her to the moon with pleasure. "Omegah! OMEGAHHHHHHhhhhhh!"

The barista dropped her head to my shoulder, she wasn't DONE done but she for sure needed to catch her breath. My dick was still pumping out cum inside her but I could feel that it wasn't as much as it had been since I'd put on the Ring of Holly and Horn. It kinda left me with a hollow ache. I was still raging hard though, knew I would stay that way because Samara was pulling me out of the barista. Knowing that I wanted her to suck me straight out of the pink pussy of the black babe.

"No!" The barista denied us though, rocking forward to keep me inside her, liking the feeling of being so full. Of cum and cock.

"Wow!" Samara not even bothered, I could feel it through the USB, cheerily climbing to her feet. Her body pressing to the barista in my arms. Brown hands sliding all over the black shoulders made my head spin, both women giving me very different sorts of looks at feeling that that aroused me. My former classmate turning to smile big at the barista, "Soap, your ass tastes so good and I'm so blessed I could do that for somebody so beautiful."

"Am I?" I could feel that it wasn't a Jessica-like need for compliments, she really didn't think so.

"Yes!" Both Samara and I said at the same time. The latina going on, "Soap you're so so beautiful!" A pout as she looked between us, "When I saw you two together I thought you were perfect for each other." A blushing laugh escaped her, "Well my first thought was that I wanted to watch you two go at it all night, like... Watching two angels do it."

"Oh my god! Angels? No!" Adorable.

While I thought... Her name was Soap? As soon as I mentally asked that I felt the USB connection confirm it, the nametag that had been taken off before confronting me swimming up in Samara's mind from her many past visits. I focused back on her and saw something on her chin.

"Is this..?" I asked not needing to finished the sentence at the large dollop on Samara's chin. It didn't look like cum, plus I was sure once I started cuming Soap was bucking around too much for Samara to do anything but splay those cheeks apart and watch.

"Yeah, that's her." I was already reaching out to swipe at it with my thumb, it was a frothy sort of mix. Very much the sort of thing that belonged in a coffee shop.

"Yeah," The barista pouted, embarrassed about it.

"It's so good." Samara told me, hoping or knowing because of the bleed over that was happening, or just the expression on my face. I popped my thumb in my mouth. It was liquim that had leaked out of the black girl, seemingly always coming out frothy by her reaction. Her thoughts. Rimming her as she did Samara had tasted it, but with her tongue in the girl's ass, most had collected on her chin and dribbled down. Samara's giggle at my groan of approval was so cute, made me pull her to me, "Good right?" She asked in delight. Then the latina's face fell, stopping in the act of pressing her big bra covered tits against us. "Where is it?"

That was a good question because it was gone.

Notes from the Author

Sorry that these are taking longer and longer to get through but I really have to force myself to edit. If I'm sitting in front of a keyboard I usually want to be writing, not editing. A lot of the time I sit down, internally berate myself for not editing, then just give up and go watch funny cats on Youtube.

This Chapter just kept shifting and evolving. It had to partly because in my head, in the miniscule sort of planning I do on stories, one of these characters was going to be more prominent than the other. While writing though they sort of switched places. A lot of the times I'm as surprised by where my stories go as anybody else.

Which brings me to Lucy Smitt. I really thought Westley was going to fuck her here, but it just wouldn't go. I guess I couldn't do that to her, Dean, or Rebecca. (From my story "Working Up an Appetite" if you didn't guess that.) A part of me kept saying cut it out or at least down but... I couldn't. I hope it added some "normality" before the crazy monster came in.

The Guy from Defluer

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abogdonovabogdonov4 months ago

@Defluer, I never leave comments, but I just discovered your story and I'm loving it! I read the comments after this chapter and just had to respond to the... person... who thinks vaginas don't taste good. I've never understood men who don't like eating pussy, because PUSSY. TASTES. AMAZING! At least, clean ones do, and right after exercise before the sweat's had a chance to sour, and oh my God, aroused pussy is fucking AMBROSIA! Okay, I've gotten a bit carried away. Point being, I'm with Defluer on this one.

Also, I really enjoyed the monster in this chapter. I agree that it was a bit confusing, but that felt completely appropriate and intentional. It's magic for crying out loud! It's supposed to be outside the normal human ability to experience. You're trying to get us all to imagine something that conceptually shouldn't be possible to exist, and it worked perfectly. Gave me strong "Katalepsis" vibes, which is a fantastic non-porn web novel that I HIGHLY recommend.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

The monster in this story was truly amazing… Having it being driven off by the energy of creating new life, I thought the concept was quite clever

The story was a little bit disjointed and hard to follow, especially with the parts about the USB

DefluerDefluer12 months agoAuthor

I've stopped responding to negative or salty comments and I'm not gonna bother with all your complaints but...

Vaginas do taste good, I'm sorry if you don't appreciate them as much as I do but don't tell me what my taste buds are telling me. Can they be yuck? Sure, but most of the time, yummy.

I've smelled my fingers after fingering a woman and had my mouth water. I've smelled my fingers after a good dinner that I thoroughly enjoyed and only thought, "I need to go wash my hands again."

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Kind of a let down. The writing around IT was disjointed and confusing, which is just off-putting. Also, I expect a certain level of fantasy and impossibility in a fantasy erotic story, but a girl being happy in a thruple? Hint: if you are afraid of "coming out" about something, it's because, even if the majority of your brain is useless and hopeless, there is a small part that recognizes that what you're doing it stupid and you shouldn't do it. Listen to that part of your brain.

While we're on that topic, vaginas don't taste good. Don't get me wrong, vagina eating is fun, but pretending it tastes good is just juvenile. Maybe the magic is changing it and if so, I apologize, but making people like the taste is just dumb. Also, that "girl cum" that came out of the barista (Soap? really? WTF name is that?)? That's literally just urine. There have been scientific studies on this. You just had Samara drink the barrista's pee and say how much she liked it. If you're into that kind of thing, whatever, you do you, but don't pretend like that is normal.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I have been coming to this site for literally-otica (sorry I had to) over two years. Never one time have left,or even thought about, thinking about leaving a comment.

But here it is.

This is actually an entertaining story. Is there a porn film that exists that the plot is liked as much as the sex? I doubt it.

I could be wrong, but it has ALSO made it more betta reading your effort increase as it has progressed. WHICH IS THE OPPOSITE OF MY COMMENT.

THERE IS ALOT FOR AN AUTHOR TO REMEMBER. YOU KIND NEED A PORNOGRAPHIC MEMORY. 👉🤏🏿

SINCERELY DR.CLEAR (not a drug refrance)

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