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But we'd won. Not just survived but won!
Notes from the Author
This one was shorter than I realized when I cut it off of the original super long Chapter 10. When originally writing it I'd I guess I'd felt that it was going on and on, too much. So I was just throwing things out to wrap up the arc as quickly as possible. I had to pretty much rewrite all of this. But got the motivation from a couple of nice email comments. (Also check your Spam filters because sometimes I do reply.)
The next part is going to be an even bigger rewrite. As a thing I alluded to became more of a thing I felt I needed to explore. Sorry as much as I thought this story was done, just had to be checked for quality (As much as I can) it seems parts need major overhauls. I really really thought this would have been all published inside of a couple of months of putting up the first one, wow was I wrong.
The Guy from Defluer
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoI loved it overall, but I thought the name thing with the virgin oral expert was too silly and detracted from the story
It would’ve been nice to get more of a feel for the nature of the monster what was its motivation? What was it trying to gain by promoting negative emotions in the girls
It would’ve also been nice to have something left behind that showed that the monster had originally been human and due to abuse or bad life experiences has ended up in the state
ecto1d42almost 2 years agoGreat story! Looking forward to seeing what other little things that were in the coffee can do. That USB is pretty handy! I also love the idea of a relationship building with Samara and him and his sister. But anyway keep writing and don't let them bastards get you down!
