by NormsGirl81
Good Wank Material, healthy fun between Consenting Adults. Sense of Urgency to Couple, stimulating material.
You have potential. Way too many grammatical errors. Literotica has voluntary editors. You need to get one.
I have to agree with the other comments. Stop using '&'. Some sentences run on and on and on and on and on. Overall okay but will be so much better with some cleanup.
Keep them coming.